Book Doctor 

Don’t know what’s wrong with your manuscript? Why the pulse is so faint? Why your book stumbles along instead of flowing smoothly? Have the book doctor take a look at it.  She’ll examine its flow, study its structure, test its pacing, and listen to its characters.  The mechanics of grammar, punctuation, and form will be carefully observed.  If it's missing something, she'll give it a transfusion.  If its heart needs jump-starting, she's got the tools and expertise to charge it back to life.  If all it needs is a little preventative maintenance, the book doctor can take care of it.  And, if it's fit for publication, she will give you the good news with a clean bill of health. 

Before you send your book out into the public arena, have it checked out by the Book Doctor.  Go to www.llumina.com/critique.htm for a Critique & Analysis.  It's like a comprehensive physical examination for your book!