Dan Neumann
(Free Verse)
Three Poems Concerning Existence
Steam drives
things despite its lack of substance.
Like love, it can create tremendous power. And,
like steam, love vanishes just as abruptly as it appears.
It begins with a bang– a combustion
A collision between the surreal and the conscious.
Love manifested around reason.
A question and an answer --
"Yes," with complicated reverberations.
She loved the intimate maneuvers
Or perhaps the relationship itself.
Romance was the only true steam.
I loved her.
She left everything behind for two months,
Misplaced with time,
An ecstasy not suited to nostalgia.
The turbines churned their last
I mourn for an imaginary girl, an identical shell.
In the end it all boils down simply enough.
Love is relentless
Empowering any soul left bare
Gyrating the gears of the vulnerable heart
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As much science and technology falls upon my lap
There is still one truth that cannot falter
There will always be that one unknown
A singularity fighting the currents of change
Because, if you look up at that black sky
And study closely, you see beautiful gems floating
You see them as stars, due to human intellect
However, if you examine harder, you realize—
They don't give a damn about us
They wouldn't care if we vanished or flourished
That's why I know God exists—
because we aren't products of fiery beasts with no remorse
We are not stardust
Gazing at our mothers
We are children of God
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Life is a curious process
Nucleic acids form in a biological splendor
And a kiss helps the DNA bond to produce again
Stars blanket the above
The great sight is born of fire
Yet provides no warmth
They say, “Golden Age.”
I think, “Civilization?”
They reply, “No, gold.”
And yet life is also overly plain
You can look left, then right
You see nature enjoy more nature
You can walk on asphalt
Friction will kick your feet back
As Physics allow
Cause and effect dictates your perceptions
Your likely to rest at home
And all is at rest
But in the end,
The verve of it all is sweet
And I got nothing better to do than live
I will write Haiku
The keyboard will feel my taps
As I think of things
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Comments:
Dan Neumann (Editor): These were poems rejected from the Scholastic Writing Contest. I would love for anyone to explain why they feel it was. Myself, I just don't think I'm good without my sentence/paragraph structure.
RCD: Click here for RCD's response (it's very long). This is an unedited response. This person refers to an Amazon Discussion Forum that - I also agree - is rather insane. -- Dan Neumann (Editor)
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Cheerless
Depression—hardens the face
Stiff expressions yield
Dispassion in all things
The repetition of cheerless thoughts
Wrings my will to desiccation
Until my cherished emotions are alien
All that was fragile, shatters
All that was fluent, dries
All that was, isn’t
“Shout!” you tell yourself
“Shout! Your mouth tastes itself.
“Shout! Before there is nothing left to say!”
Then it calms…
“Hey,” you say, “it doesn’t mean a thing”
Until, that is, you feel better
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Comments:
Dan Neumann (Editor): I just wrote this when I didn't feel very good... understandably. But the crafting of it made me feel great. Let me know how you feel... and perhaps if this ever helps you in a "dry spell."
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